When You Give Up Something You Love

I’m rewriting some third person point of view chapters into first person for Darkwalker.

I’ve come across my first omniscient “little did he know” type sentence.

Stranger Than Fiction

I can’t fix it in the suitable point of view. Exactly halfway into the book, I give the first hint at the ending, and unfortunately, I have to let it go.

I’m quite sad to see it disappear into nothing. It’s one of my favourite sentences, but it just doesn’t fit no matter how much I tweak it.

It’s also a spoiler, so I can’t post it here. But be guaranteed that it’s the first problem I’ve come across turning my high fantasy from sometimes-third-person-POV to completely-first-person-POV.

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